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This is an impulse. But it's Part 1 of what may become longer.  

Mature.

Comment as you will. More is coming.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This story is quite interesting, because it mainly consists of conversation.

The writing style is consistent, quotation marks are properly use to guide the reader as are line breaks. So the converations are easily followed.

The author managed to transport all background information seamless insid the conversations. So the characters are properly described in their appearence and their life background.

The style of speaking of the characters is well linked to their description, the reader can easily get familiar with them.

For me with an non-English mothertounge it is at some points difficult to follow the conversation, mostly because I am not familiar with American universities. Also it is difficult to keep track, who is speaking. But, as stated above, the story and the characters are clearly outlined and easy to understand.

I would like to read a continuation.