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A truck-stop shopgirl changes her life. Chapter 1 of what may be several.
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Comment as you will. This chapter's done. I also like notes.
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Comment as you will. This chapter's done. I also like notes.
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The story is interesting but I have some criticism to give for the structure. It's too cluttered, I'd say double space each paragraph and it'll look better. Other than that, I like where it's going.